Don't like the background color, or the fabric of what she's sitting on. The feather cover is a complete contrast to the surroundings and does clash. This shot also seems a bit out of focus.
I like her fierce, proud look. You did a great job capturing her attitude. I only gave this a 5 because I think the red in her complextion is too deep. The colors themselves do not blend well together and the design of the upholstery is very distracting. I think it would have been more interesting if you had cropped up to just below her shoulder and cloned out the sofa and corrected the wb.
Great capture. I love the expression and the face. My only suggestion would be to set your camera on a tripod to ensure a sharper focus. However, I love the colours and the composition. Good luck!
This is a great idea, with gentle soft focus. Cropping into the left shoulder and down to the top of the head might add emphasis to the subject, as would a lighter background. My compliments to your model.
looks like you got a little motion blur or the focus is off... also, the wall behind her is very flat, especially where the light is dim behind her head, i would have tried throwing some light on the wall for a gradient or accent.
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