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02/20/2008 02:19:29 PMPost actions
There's a nice old-time rural feel about this shot -- very genuine. I like the lighting, color, focus, detail, and texture. Something about the composition is a little uncomfortable, but I can't put my finger on it exactly. The arrangement of the three items: loaf, slice, and knife, just seem unbalanced or unnatural.
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02/20/2008 04:58:39 AMPost actions
emo? Not sure I'd agree. Then again, I have no idea what that means. It's not too dark to me (after all, it's dark bread) and detail is quite nice.
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02/18/2008 08:49:09 PMPost actions
I like the use of the knife and this one A think a little stronger lighting would have yielded you a little better score.
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02/17/2008 02:48:29 PMPost actions
Seems a bit dark. A little brighter with more contrast would have made this pop. I like the lighting against the knife blade.
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02/15/2008 01:21:56 AMPost actions
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02/14/2008 10:07:33 PMPost actions
Too underexposed and not enough contrast between the bread and the table.
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02/14/2008 09:45:03 PMPost actions
That cutting board makes this picture almost touchable. The texture in it is amazing! The metal looks very nice as well. Couldn't ask for more.
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02/13/2008 02:58:02 PMPost actions
I like the overall composition and the textures on this one. I think a slightly wider view would have worked better.
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02/13/2008 12:02:18 PMPost actions
I like the way the bright reflecting knofe enhances the brightness of the overall picture
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02/13/2008 07:58:11 AMPost actions
I like the contrast of the knife over the bread. I'd like to see the overall image brightened a bit, but that's just me being picky.
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