The white balance seems a bit off in this shot, though maybe you wanted the yellow tint. I feel a more solid background could help b/c the background is a bit dstracting imo.
I think that you could have only put one or two items of toppings in the frame and made the image a little more interesting. The background objects are too neat and strait in a row. I think that it could have used some ruffling up.
The white balance seems to be way off in this shot and it is a bit too cluttered. I studied it trying to see if you were attempting to tell a story with this setup - different breads/empty sugar free jars/caps on - caps off, etc. But wasn't able to make out anything.
This is a nicely composed still life of bread and the texture of the bread stands out well. It has however some problems. First of all, your white balance is off, the light is too warm. You can and should correct for this, either in-camera or in PP. Second, there are several distracting elements in the background. With a still life, try to keep your background as neutral as possible. Third, I would have liked a slightly lower POV on this one, to give it a more classic still life look.
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