Just looking through your portfolio of entries. All your photos are thought out in some way. You have a certain attention to the idea which seems to be the priority - over the "looks" of the photo. I can understand that. There's a logic there and it's interesting to see how your photo skills are developing. When you comment on other photos here you also seem to look and learn. Keep up the good work or learning and I hope you enjoy this hobby...
Pretty neat creation. However, the photograph could use some help. DOF needs to be a bit more and the pieces on top have some blown out spots, probably from the flash.
The lighting on this is a little off. I also think it could a benefited from a different angle. Also when you use your editing software adjusting the contrast might help to draw out some of the detail in the bread and give the appearance of a sharper image.
good idea but not enough of the photo is in focus, the shadows are a bit distracting and I think a background other than the white might have given it a bit better contrast