Looks very different on different screens, I can see both eyes on my laptop, but only one on a desktop. I like the idea, just not sure how well it works, as there are two focus points. I think it would score a lot higher with the hands in a different position. I'll give you a 5 for trying something different
Nice shot though I don't quite see the connection with the title - love how the one eye that is easy to see gives such a strong sense of what the other eye looks like and the long, straight fingers (and shadows) against the rounded shapes of the face is a nice counterpoint. - 8