I really like the black and white treatment and the focus is very nice. Maybe a little less hair covering the face, which is quite appealing. Would like to see more of it. :) But overall a very nice shot.
I like this diagonal composition with the B&W, reminds me of a fashion magazine cover. I also like her expression and her eye and mouth sparkling from behind her hair. The lighting is great here, the photo is wonderful, take 10 from me, and good luck! :-)
did you mean for this to be horizontal? I think vertical would be better(forgive me, I don't want to insult your artistic side). - gorgeous portrait otherwise.
I think that photographically it's a sound work, but to me the angle is far too steep and that the hair in the face is a bit too excessive. I like the B/W tones and the background as well as the fall off...you know i just saved and rotated it more upright and personally I totally liked the shot better. But it is always subjective of course.
Your photo is really nice, I like the focus and the wet look on the lips. I guess you must have rotated the photo after you took it as her hair looks like it is defying gravity. When a girl with long hair tips her head, her hair falls to the side - for some reason when you first glance at this photo you get that feeling -- what's wrong with this picture - like in Games Magazine.
To me, the tilt of the picture is such a strong contrast to "gravity-defying" look of her hair that it adds a bit of a strange feeling to the shot. I can't quite seem to put it into words. Other than that, it is an excellent portrait.
I like the b/w...for the off center orientation I am really distracted by her hand under her chin...my eyes keep drawing back to her hand instead of to her eyes...I like everything else about this
love the hair covering her face. makes it dramatic. i have a picture submitted of hair in the way and I got dingged for it. i guess some people don't really look into the pic and realize that it was your intention!...oh well.
Nice modern trendy shot and the lovely model is right for the image
Nice detail and focus
The only thing I am not keen on is the border but I am not taking points off for that
The photo is well taken and looks great in grayscale...I am a little uncomfortable with the angle...if the bottom hairs were 'hanging'down it would look like a more natural pose in my humble opinion.
Nicely done. The contrast is right on as well as the sharpnes a DOF. For my own personal taste though: the tilted shot takes away from the picture because the hair is not falling with it. The hair itself is rather distrating. BOL
Pretty girl. Iike this but want to see more of her without the hair. This is more of a fashion/magazine type pose......that's okay too and it' done very well. Good lighting and focus. Hope you do well.
she's very pretty, but it's like she's hiding behind her hair ... also, a little too much tilt, i think ... good lighting, nice catchlights, and i like the pose
Nice interesting portrait. Like the idea of the rotated crop but a portrait instead of landscape aspect (just rotate the whole picture 90 degrees ccw!) would possibly make it easier to view - I keep twisting my neck. Nicely lit.