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03/28/2004 12:23:27 PMPost actions
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Tiberius...
This is a rather nice portrait. The composition is good and I particularly like the softness of it. Her eye direction is nice because it makes me wonder what she is looking at.
The only part that bothers me about this image is the gray in her hair and in the background. This may have come from color desaturation, but I'm not sure...
John Setler
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03/21/2004 04:19:47 PMPost actions
I love this picture! Beautiful skin-tones. Good composition.
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03/19/2004 10:13:34 AMPost actions
Excellent model and lovely expression. She is a little artist. Good use of daylight. Background a tad busy but I still love it. 10 from me.
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03/18/2004 07:38:26 PMPost actions
I think this would have ben much better had she been looking more at the camera
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03/17/2004 10:09:33 PMPost actions
Beautiful shot... lovely ... 7
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03/17/2004 05:50:27 PMPost actions
The eyes capture your heart. Good use of soft control
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03/17/2004 03:55:26 PMPost actions
Nice composition and the mood captured is interesting - I keep wanting to see what she's reacting to! The colors are great. - 7
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03/17/2004 12:23:48 PMPost actions
Very nice close up, try shooting this again with a solid back ground and I think you will be pleased with a different look. Nice work keep it up. And a most beautiful subject, is she always so serious?
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03/16/2004 12:15:17 PMPost actions
A bit too soft for my liking. Nice Picture, like her strands of hair all messed up, doesn't look too posed because of this.
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03/15/2004 07:44:37 PMPost actions
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03/15/2004 07:37:59 PMPost actions
Great eyes, hair and light. Need a bit more focus, sharper. Good entry. Brown eyed girl. Awesome.
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03/15/2004 07:10:25 PMPost actions
Great shot. This girl looks like she's up to something. I love how you captured the essence of childhood with one click. I love the little jacket and the expression on her face. Plus, it's a great composition, good tone, etc. Good luck! I'm sure you'll do well.
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03/15/2004 01:25:21 PMPost actions
sweetest model, verry nice pose.
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03/15/2004 12:50:30 PMPost actions
Wide eyed beauty. BOL IMO: Little too soft a focus. More contrast would also help.
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03/15/2004 09:20:38 AMPost actions
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03/15/2004 06:32:27 AMPost actions
the very soft focus or motion blur takes away from this for me, i want more detail!
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03/15/2004 06:30:24 AMPost actions
Hello there! What a lovely expression - gentle soft focus enhances, so does the hair blowing in the wind, lending a natural look, nicely lit too.
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03/15/2004 12:48:08 AMPost actions
Looks a little over exposed perhaps needs to be more sharper. But a nice shot and cute. Good luck.
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03/15/2004 12:46:42 AMPost actions
What big eyes! The soft focus hurts this shot a bit, I think. My preferance would have been not quite so much of a close up.
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