i feel a better setting/background might have helped this shot. Maybe an open table where you could get all the bread and butter in the frame. The picture also seems to be slanted.
I'm afraid this one just comes across fairly plain. It's not very sharp and it's also visibly skewed. White balance may have not been great, but I'd have to see what other settings looked like. Lots of great potential in it though. A closer view of some of these may have had more impact.
Most of the positioning of the bread (the slices) is appealing - but the two loaves standing on end making an "A" frame is unnatural and a bit of a distraction to your image. The item in the upper right could be one of several things - a gallon of milk, an appliance? My mind wants to know for sure. This object and the butter dish are blown out and a bit distracting as well. I think the image might benefit from a basket or something in the background to help with the wall & back splash.
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