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This would be a good idea for an abstract shot, there's just not enough subject for this challenge.
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While I understand from your title that you were going for a simple look, the end result seems a little bland to my eyes. The texture of the bread is a little plain and the DOF seems too shallow. Without the title, I'm not sure I would recognize it as bread and not a sponge or loofah of some sort.
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Work on composition, lighting, and tonal range.
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Needs more focus, and some "interest.
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Great shot, would have loved to have seen just a tad more grain, detail to this shot
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the blue shadow in the middle looks like mould
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Would be better to fill the frame with the bread (ie crop the lower left corner).
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A different angle of view would have brought out the texture more I think.
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