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02/13/2008 04:55:44 AMPost actions
My favorite from this challenge, espcially since it is both an ad for the marker and an alternative take on the challenge through the text. I nominated it for an OOBIE award.
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02/12/2008 07:29:28 PMPost actions
Really good. Well composed and heck,... your gonna get lots of other great comments on this, so I'm gonna skip the analysis of this one and press on.
02/12/2008 05:55:42 PMPost actions
Simple and straightforward take on the theme, and the "highlighted" frame makes sense and is actually kind of witty!
02/12/2008 11:13:14 AMPost actions
Subtle, great positioning of the logo on the pen. It's not immediately obvious whats being advertised, but I think it works well in this case.
02/12/2008 12:25:22 AMPost actions
Good. Bright and to the point. 7
02/11/2008 02:38:02 PMPost actions
Very different from all the other entries. Most people have gone for a 'sexier' product, but this shot is such a high standard that it carries the product.
Delightfully crisp and clear. Technically great.
I hope it does well.
02/11/2008 10:10:22 AMPost actions
I like the way you highlighted commercial messages by doing this it creates interest
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02/11/2008 02:46:10 AMPost actions
02/10/2008 01:40:41 AMPost actions
Nice color. Like the DOF and sharpness of on the highlighter.
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02/07/2008 07:58:47 PMPost actions
clear and sharp. dont like the border. 6.
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02/07/2008 04:32:14 PMPost actions
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02/06/2008 07:55:21 PMPost actions
Not bad. I'm sure what's being sold here but I'd find a bit more clever text to highlight. technicals are right on.
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02/06/2008 06:26:43 PMPost actions
That yellow border wouldn't work for anything else other than highlighters.
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02/06/2008 04:37:11 PMPost actions
Effective. I just don't like the shadowing on the pen. Which is a minor point.
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02/06/2008 04:29:30 PMPost actions
wow great sharpness and color on the highlighted and text. 8
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02/06/2008 03:55:07 PMPost actions
I like your take on the challenge. Great execution too (apart from the minor yellow spill on 'ancient'). I think it should ribbon, but I don't think it will, because too many voters will think this is not an advert.
Hope I am wrong though. 9
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02/06/2008 10:58:55 AMPost actions
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02/06/2008 04:50:27 AMPost actions
good idea and composition. the yellow border is a bit too much and distracts from the clean and simple image
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