Likes: Its a cool artistic approach to the subject. Eyes are vivid and sharp, DOF is good.
Dislikes: Its more of a personal preference if one likes the approach, I love the artistic approach. But if i had to pick something i guess more shadow detail around the eyes?
Fantastic with the eyes. Great light, great angle to present them at, and a great idea with the white mummy strips to really set them off as well. A couple of nitpicky things. The top white strip actually leads my eye right to some eyebrow hair that wants to come poking out. Also the bottom crop cuts it just a bit close to the bottom lid. I am sure there were some compelling reasons to crop it that way, so both of those are pretty minimal and don't really impact my score at all, but I always love getting other sets of eyes comments on my shots so figure I will try to do what I always hope for in comments.