This is kind of funny, in a way cartoonish thanks to the selective desat and the strong primary colors. I really like that red! Unfortunately, I'm not a huge selective de-sat fan, but if I were, I would like this a lot more. I do like the decisions you made for how to do the selective desaturation. Nice with the clear Car Wash sign.
The distortion of the subjects are rather unique. I am guessing the entire frame is also a reflection. Nice job with the selective desat, but whatever is in his right hand looks a bit messy. Well done.