If the hair was not blocking her eye, this would be a great image. For this challenge (for me) both eyes should be in the shot and at least one of the eyes has to be in sharp focus. If the hair was not blocking her eye that is in focus, I'd give this a good score. I do like the idea and overall processing though.
I like the composition and the touch of mystery but i think the eyes are not special enough for an eye challenge. one is obscured and the other out of focus. But somehow i still like this one well enough. 7
This is a nice portrait, but the subject is definitely not the eyes. One eye is covered by hair, and one eye is not even in focus. They don't hurt the composition of the portrait, but this isn't a portrait challenge.