It is a bit noisy, a bit "red" and I think a tighter crop on the right would make it more balanced. But, it is a precious capture and one that you (or whoever the parents are) will always treasure, regardless of what "I" think.
The tenderness here is both lovely and priceless. It appears the light was quite low but that certainly doesn't detract from the beauty captured. You may want to try this in B&W as well.
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