I find my eye drawn towards her ear. must be the bright area on it. I want my eyes drawn to the eye, but it is looking WAY away, to where it is hard to even distinguish a pupil. A soft focus would work on here throughout. or a larger DOF to get everything in focus (nose to eye are pretty soft compared to the L shoulder
lovely model. good lighting. i think it would have been a little more engaging if we could see more of her eyes. the eyes are the windows into the soul. cliche but true.
Pretty girl and the light is okay. I just have a need to see 'eyes' in these shots. I realized this is a profile, and that fine too. Not a bad entry and I hope you do well.
This really conveys a mood. Great lighting and skin tones. My only suggestion would be to extend the image out a bit to the left - even if it's just negative/empty space. The way it is posed would suggest the composition needs some balance to the left of the woman's face. However, overall great shot. I hope you do well!
This is a very attractive portrait with nice gentle tones and it works well against the dark background. A crop to the bottom, up to the lower edge of the horizontal shadow, would make another good picture.
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