It's pretty hard to get 5 year olds to do exactly what you want, but I think I captured a great moment here. Cropped, digital noise removal, curves, and added border. Oh, and accidentally left my ISO way too high, oh well.
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It looks like it was cropped too close. The face and foot are out to the edges a bit too far. The girls face is in shadow and could have been brightened a bit. As a candid shot this was good. If it was posed, I would have gotten the girl to raise here face a bit.
Image tells a nice storey, however the girl's eyes are not emphasized enough.
The eyes needs to have some highlight or catchlights to be more attractive. Also the other children in the image makes it a little too busy 4