I understand the point of putting the focal point on the wire to emphasise your 'caged' meaning, but I feel that it might have been more visually appealing the other way around.
I love the concept here. I'm not sure if this was originally a lot bigger and you cropped a small piece of the image or not. It's a bit grainy with lots of image noise. It also somehow doesn't seem as in focus as it could be (not as sharp). I know the parallel lines are supposed to be the main subject, but I almost feel liek I want to see more detail of the deer in behind as well. You may be able to address this next time by playing around with depth of field. However, I really like that you did something unique and original. Good luck!
Your composition is good.
The overall focus is poor, even though your tried to focus in on the parallel lines.
I would like to see the focus reversed here (on the deer) since you call attention to beauty in your title.
The picture could be bigger overall.
Misspelled title, probably a typo you didn't catch before submittal.
Very well framed and composed. May have increased the focus on the deer a bit more to have the parallel lines of the cage 'highlight' the situation rather than 'dominate', but the idea comes through clearly.
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