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05/22/2008 10:37:21 PMPost actions
A simple idea, and its gives a soft, but also a strong impact to the viewer. Simplicity at it best.
One only suggestion is that the HP logo, is not completely centered or straight. These two points would have improved your score.
I saying this, I feel is should have scored a little higher, as I like the idea.
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02/13/2008 03:09:28 PMPost actions
you could have at least straightened it... good try!
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02/11/2008 01:28:11 PMPost actions
I like these "less is more" approach ads. However,when you go for this everything has to be "tack" sharp. Logo seems a bit tilted too.
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02/11/2008 10:09:09 AMPost actions
the camera angle is straight on, if you had an interesting angle it could have made the shot better
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02/11/2008 02:26:24 AMPost actions
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02/10/2008 10:02:37 AMPost actions
Doesn't look sharp. Did you want fuzzy?
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02/10/2008 08:34:53 AMPost actions
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02/10/2008 01:48:02 AMPost actions
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02/08/2008 06:49:48 PMPost actions
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02/07/2008 09:20:47 PMPost actions
This is a good picture but it is a little off center and crooked.
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02/07/2008 09:16:26 PMPost actions
right side is a bit too dark for me. Great concept, and I like the crop & composition a lot.
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02/07/2008 10:14:50 AMPost actions
This could be straightened to be level and be much better. OR it could be even more tilted... but if you're going to break a rule, then bust it wide open or it seems like an accident. :)
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02/07/2008 10:14:17 AMPost actions
Sorry, but this doesn't do much for me. The lighting is too harsh on the left side of the emblum, and I think I can even see you in the reflection. It might be just me, but the subject doesn't look completely straight.
In my opinion, if you're going to do such a simple photograph, it really has to be perfect technically.
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02/07/2008 06:24:27 AMPost actions
Doesn't say anything about the product.
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02/06/2008 09:13:49 PMPost actions
Watch out for the slight right tilt.
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02/06/2008 03:42:28 PMPost actions
I like minimalist shots. But minimalism only works if they are perfect. And this one is slightly unlevel. Would be unnoticable in a 'normal' shot, but very disturbing in this one.
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02/06/2008 10:57:45 AMPost actions
Sometimes simple has impact but not this time I'm afraid. Certainly the slight angle helps.
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02/06/2008 10:30:46 AMPost actions
Yes, HP but isn't it kinda plain
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02/06/2008 09:24:25 AMPost actions
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02/06/2008 08:41:41 AMPost actions
not quite straight in frame detracts, either straight or more of an angle
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