The people in the right corner of the picture are blurry, which take away from the whole shot. By using a new angle the picture could have been more interseting.
Cute idea but I think the DOF should have been greater so the couple is more in focus. My inital thought when looking at this was "why are the people out of focus, they should be cropped out". Then I read the title and got it.
The people blurred out in the corner really bug me. Also, it seems taht your blues are jst really grey except for on the text. Subject has potential, but other angles would probably benefit it MUCH more
Funny, but most wouldn't get it. I like the concept but think a tighter shot of the couple with a wider angle would've gotten the effect I think you're trying for.