I like the idea - two people front on. The backlighting of the hair is also interesting. But the person in front of the camera is too much in shade for my tastes and there is an inbalance of darkness to the left of the image which I am not personally keen on. Kavey
this is pretty cool but the light behind her head stands out more than your reflection. I also think if you had been able to show her face more that would make this one better.