Good idea for parallels, but you have to focus better. The lighting and crop are good, but a sharp focus would have bumped this up a couple points higher.
This was a nice approach to the challenge if only there was something - just something - in focus! You my find yourself with a brown ribbon due to that one issue I'm afraid. ;)
A great idea but unfortunately not executed well enough. Its too off-focus and the lighting a bit poor. In situations like these i would have used a tripod with a longer exposure instead. You don't need a fancy camera to make great pictures just know your camera's capabilities. I'm sure your camera has the "night shot" option (the one with the moon shape) so you can take pictures under these lighting (or lack of it) conditions. A good effort nevertheless! 3