I think the composition and lighting could have been better, looks kinda like a "spur of the moment shot." I like the idea you're driving at though. Good expressions.
quite like this, good expressions. If this was set up and posed cangratulations to your models, if it is a candid shot well done for grabbing a moment in time. Something about the glasses n the foreground bothers me though, pulls my eye to them.
Excellent job getting to expressions in the one photo. Lighting works good to set mood and focus is pretty good. I do find the glasses in the foreground a distraction though.
Two different reactions to the off-screen action. Good idea and the first picture I've seen using that. Very unique. That said, the purple caste to the faces (from a TV I assume) and the glasses in the front left keep this from being a point or two better.
They both look like chicks! JK! The title helps me understand this photo. It shows the male looking a bit entertained, and the female grimacing. The lamp's reflection threw your exposure off a bit, but a great idea....
Liked this photo, captured the feeling of watching a movie on the sofa quite well. I bet you didn't need as detailed a title; I assume you are addressing the different emotions they are showing. No explanation is necessary to me!