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Something has to be hidden or missing... The background is completely irrelevant.Message edited by HBunch - Critique Club status removed.
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Nice picture but it doesn't really make one wonder what is off screen.
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I don't think this really fits the theme...and no offense, but the expression on the model's face isn't the most attractive...
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It looks to me like all the action is on-screen. It's a nice shot otherwise.
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I don't get the feeling of an off screen expectation from this
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Interesting. A little small, soft, and too centered. Not sure how it meets the challenge.
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i see no expectation or implied off-frame action. could use better lighting
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I don't see that she is expecting anything off-screen. This looks like a random snap shot, with little thought given to background or lighting or composition.
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this is too snapshotty due to flash, this photo would look better with diffused lighting, a cheap way to do that is light thru window or lamp w/o it's shade.
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I do not understand how you fit this to the challenge I'm afraid
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cute girl.... where is the expectation here?
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