nice interior photo...however without the title it would appear to be just 2 ladies standing in a hallway...I don't get the feeling of an off screen expectation from this
I really like this one, a good expression, they have done this so many times. Waiting for the audience to come out. Image is slightly tilted to the left.
I asume that you are shooting this with high ISO in difficult lightning condition. Bit grainy and dull colors. More colorsaturation and have you tried to convert it to B/W?
Little implication of anything happening past the edge of the frame. these women look as though they will have to wait a long time for anything to happen! Nicely captured though in tricky lighting conditions.