Original photo covered the upper half of my girlfriends body. It costed me quite some time to get the eye in the right sharpness, as well as the eyebrows.
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I would like to thank you all for placing your comments, all of them were interesting and encouraging to keep on taking photographs! Afterwards I also thought that the picture would have been more exciting if I wouldn't be visible in the girl's eye.
The glare of the camera in the eye, I feel, ruins the moment here. The photo would be great, without the glare, I know it is hard but a slight angle can remove this from the picture.
i can see your entire reflection in this shot, it lowered my vote substantually. it's not in focus and you should have had another source of light. the composition was somewhat interesting.
I understand what you were going for especially with the title...I don't thnk it was achieved with this shot though...the reflection of the camera is very distracting
What does this eye have to do with lingerie? It looks more like the person in the reflection is actually about to shoot the person with eye with some sort of a gun. I know its a camera but the angle and lack of details looks like it could be a shot gun up close and personal.
Hmmm. The title tells me you have a great idea. The composition is lacking to me... maybe with a little more of the face we could have gotten a more mischeivous feel for the subject..to convey more of an expectation to the viewer.
You might have included the reflection of the photographer on purpose, but I feel that it really detracts from an otherwise nice shot.
The title doesn't really apply here, in my opinion.
Good idea, but as someone told me ... you can't realy on the title. I can see the camera in her eye .. which is great photography, but it takes away from the seductive message you are trying to convey.
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