This photo, though on a black background, is missing something that grabs you. Perhaps you need to show the entire toy, or blur the parts that you cut off at the bottom. I think you could use more contrast and clarity too.
welllllllllllllll....... hmmm
good attempt....
the lighting is week. it seems like you used a flash.. which created rather front, direct lighting. the background is supposed to be flat black... but i see wrinkles and lines from the cloth. The croping is rather hmm heavy maybe. It sits very heavy on the bottom of the frame.. and looses my interest. The subject matter isn't 'that' interesting to me. This is the angle i 'always' see those toys.. perhaps from a angle that is not usually viewed could have been interesting.
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