this would be a lot better with the bottom of the window level with the photograph, and perhaps a bit more contrast. not sure what the black and white treatment is for, as i feel that the multicolored jackets of the children would make for a far more interesting foreground.
Nice candid capture. You almost want to semi-pose this (i.e. have one child not interested (using thirds) with their back to the window looking bored just to add some contrast and draw my focus to a central point somewhere in the row of kids. Focus is nice and crisp. Good Luck. 6.
This is a cool photo, with everyone looking out the window. I think it just needs a bit more contrast or curves, and I also think it would have more impact if the photo were straightened.
While kinda cute I don't think it is quite right. the shadows on the right are nice and would be interesting if they ran throughout. color might help but then again with so many people it might make it worse. in the end it is a nice capture but not quite awsoeme. 6
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