Nice capture, but I'm not sure that this overlay works. To be brutally frank, to me, those horizontal and vertical lines just mess up her face, which is very interesting. If you're going to overlay, maybe one of those frames with flecks of "dirt" in them might make this look like an old snapshot. A toned b&w conversion would work well, too, or maybe a judicious amount of acid.
Just suggestions and worth what you're paying for them. 8)
Good choice on the layer. When I mentally edit the layer out, the fuzziness is pretty apparent, but with the layer the lines appear to be a part and a compliment to the natural textures of her face. Well done.
I understand why you did it, but i wish you'd left off the overlay..her face is so interesting and wonderful with its own textures, and now all that life is competing for my eye. her eyes are gorgeous!!