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03/23/2004 12:16:08 PMPost actions
From critique club.
This shot is exhibiting superb technique and knowledge of composition. The title is intriguing and fits the challenge. The only thing that leaves me uncomfortable is colors. The flower does not look "yummy" - the green cast spoils it and for the eye of a bee... The bees have a completely different than human colorspace in their vision ;-) they see green as us - grey.
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Comments Made During the Challenge
03/16/2004 01:39:07 PMPost actions
03/15/2004 11:52:45 PMPost actions
Interesting use of the (off-screen) subject and the title!
03/15/2004 11:26:34 PMPost actions
Sorry, I just couldn't figure out the relationship to the topic.
03/15/2004 01:35:40 PMPost actions
Wow, great focus, colors -- the whole works! Nicely done! 9
03/14/2004 01:01:12 AMPost actions
Interesting idea, nice macro.
03/13/2004 01:27:28 AMPost actions
I don't get the feeling of an off screen expectation from this
03/12/2004 04:03:38 PMPost actions
I would say that this would go better in the parallel lines competition
03/11/2004 11:10:12 AMPost actions
beautiful flower shot, but nothing dealing with off-screen expectation
03/10/2004 05:26:52 PMPost actions
Looks more like baby powder then pollen. Just a bit too much.
03/10/2004 03:49:17 PMPost actions
Yup, I get this. Lovely close up study. The title of your submission means everything...I can hear it coming....great work.
03/10/2004 12:34:34 PMPost actions
It's a good macro of a flower, but I can't see the "off-screen expectation".
03/10/2004 11:19:06 AMPost actions
Congrats on working in a flower shot that atcually meets the theme quite well.
03/10/2004 10:36:02 AMPost actions
Pretty flower shot. Unfortunately, there is nothing in this shot that tells me the flower is expecting anything. Only the title gives a hint on that.
03/10/2004 08:06:50 AMPost actions
Nice idea, though that pollen doesn't look very real to me
03/10/2004 07:43:08 AMPost actions
Im not sure what to make of this image. Maybe its coz I dont have a clue what the white is (pollen?) : )
03/10/2004 04:35:55 AMPost actions
Creative interpretation but it takes a while to feel anything happening past the edge of the frame. Nicely composed though with good focus.