This is a shot I took this summer of my friends and then I entered it in the State Fair and I won first place now I am interested in what Every one will think of it. Its not overly edited so who knows.
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I really like the tranquility of this image. Much like mine (next place) which I have sold large prints, I see it has received much better success outside the domain of DPC.
Nice composition. Your foucs is off, I would have tried to zone in on the woman's face, it appears to be on the grass in the foreground. A little more contrast and shadows could have punched up the image a bit. Also may pull back a bit to try and give a little more emphasis on there isolation and closeness of enjoying the summer day together. Good Luck. 5.
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