The background is a little distracting. If you could have gotten the shot from a higher perspective (don't know if thats possible) most of the background would be gone.
I thought of doing something similar to this. I ran into the same problem as I see here. I just don't see the interest....no interesting composition, angle or story to be had by viewing this photo, although technically I think it's fine. I think it would have been a little stronger with traditional swings.
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