This is a beautiful image! I personally might have tried to take the photo from a different angle or tilted the subject's head in a slighly different way however... because although I like the way she is looking towards the camera out of the corner of her eyes, it has caused the pupil in the farthest eye to disappear, leaving it all white. So maybe a different POV. But this is so beautiful - I LOVE the rich colors of her hair and the tones and contrasts are lovely! :)