Awww, she is so cute. It is very bright, especially on the ice cream. You could've had better lighting and possibly could've put her behind the ice cream, that would have made it a little more interesting to look at.
looks delicious.....a bit too much of a "snapshot" look to it though??? Wondering if perhaps, having taken a different angle to this might have made a difference? Perhaps by having your model's face closer to the ice cream dish and perhaps, zooming in on just her eyes above the ice cream might have given it more of a "professional" look as opposed to snapshot look???? Just my 2 cents worth. Nothing more.
A+ for originality: no snow and no icicle. ;-)
The pink shirt is a little distracting though.
I would have liked use of DOF on the ice cream to really make it *pop*.