Personally, I thought this shot was great. Very artistic from the framing to the colors you choose for the runner against that particular wall. I was disappointed on how it placed.
Great wall as a backdrop. In some ways it's a bit busy given the scale of the runner. I also think the motion blur in the runner is a little detracting. But I love the wall ;)
Each of the bodies shows the blur of motion, which would be great with a single body in the shot, but the time lapse already portrays that. I'd rather see nice crips subjects.
good example of time lapse. the model seems a little out of focus and running across a flat surface isn't the most exciting. the wall is very interesting and the colours are nice against that background.
Very nice. You may have done better with a simpler background. I know that you have a focus on the brick, but with it being so busy and with the runner's motion blur, it gives the appearance that you don't have a focus. Your colors look great, and I love how the hood comes off part way through, it makes the story that much better
I find the brick wall to be a more interesting than your main subject running. This one just doesn't seem to go it for me. The image looks like your camera was focused more on the wall that draws my attention than the runner. 5.