The heating element is the most interesting part of the picture. The little bit of lighting on the bottom either from a flash or other lighting distracts. Darkening the room would really bring more attention to the spiral shape. The contrast of the orange and the black would make it a great abstract.
Harsh lighting in the bottom of the frame. Fairy easy difficulty factor and so I can't see this scoring particularly highly I'm afraid. Perhaps a more angled, abstract composition where only a portion of the ring is visible, with really hard pushed contrast so that it appears as glowing rings on a perfectly black background might have been more effective.
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