Initial=interesting Composition=good Clarity (focus, details)=a bit blurry Exposure=good Interesting or Emotive=interesting to look at. Nice self portrait.
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I really like this. It definitely gives us a feel for "your corner". The way the light from the TV shines on your face is perfect. And I love that we can see your messiness! Funny thing is that I almost did a picture very similar for my entry. I like yours better!
messy ... the mood is really strong ... I love the green glow ... really arty and works eaven if it is cluttered with stuff, cause of the light on the face...I would have cut the tv out but...well maybe it should stay in there...this is a 9