Nice idea and styling, but the execution deserves a lttle more attention. Not quite sure what you did whith the bg for instance, but it looks messy, as if you dodged and burned it carelessly. Bot hands are in awkward position, and it seems your right hand comes from outside the picture. Other (minor) technicalities include the flash reflection on the magazine and the tight crop on the upper side.
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