Challenge:Silence IV (Basic Editing I) Camera:Nikon D100 Location: San Diego, CA Date: Feb 27, 2004 Aperture: f40 ISO: 200 Shutter: 15sec Date Uploaded: Feb 28, 2004
Its a fine shot. Did you try a closer angel and set the focus to get the things closest to the lens out of focus? Dont know if its possible since the subject is abolutly black and white but how about litle more contrast?
I like this but there just seems to be something, I'm not sure what, missing. Something that makes it "pop!" So, that probably doesn't help much, but ... Still a nice job.
I like this photo, but I think I would like it more if the focus was moved more towards the middle. The lines pull my eye from the bottom left to the top right, into the fuzzy area. Then again, maybe that was the effect you were going for - trying to get a visual version of the sound fading away?