A nice beach scene, and though it fits the Wabi-Sabi concept, it does not scream it to me. I think that may be because the subject is the perfect blue water and not the dilapidated little shack.
For me the composition lets this image down. Placing the palm in the center of the image has almost split the image in two and then the boats and hut just look 'messy'.
Its a shame because there is a lot of potential here. Perhaps moving to the right and making more of the tired (but quite interesting) old hut (which may have hidden some of the inflatables on the shore).
Lots of places for my eye to go here. The leaning hut is really really distracting to my eye. The overhanging palm is also distracting to me as well. I think if you want an overhanging palm I would put more of it in the frame so the viewer knows it is an important part of the image not just a palm that got in the way of a snapshot. Same thing with the shadows from the palm in front of the camera. Either more so its deliberate or none at all.
wonderful pictures. It would have been better for me if the overhead palm leaves were not in the picture. it kind of distracts from the real beauty of the ocean.
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