Nice idea to experiment with a comcept like this, but I think the pic is too dark and the composition is not what I would expect from a still life. In a good still, life, the composition leads the eye of the viewer in a logical order along the subjects. That doesnt happen here.
It is unnecessary to describe your technique in the title. If the technique works, the photo will stand on its own. If it doesn't no technique description will help. Just my opinion.