I suggest to add some contrast to the image (for example by making the wall lighter, possibly in bw), it could still retain its gloomy mood and become more attractive
Very simple. Good idea. I do however like to see tall subjects in portrait mode and wide subjects in landscape. So to me, this has too much dead space on the left. A little light in contrast too.
I like the concept and also the choice to move the object from the center of the frame. Also the choice of white background is a really nice touch. I think the lack of color in your 1 will probably end up hurting the shot a little, but hey you have to work with the everyday when finding the beauty in the everyday. A nice shot and I like the thought process.