This was a fun shoot for me. I am really trying to improve in the area of portrait photography and this was a great opportunity. This is my friend. who needed some shots for work and a website she is developing. I hope you like it!
Any critique is welcome! I really just want to get better! Thanks!
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I like the idea behind the photo - a soft ronantic feel. I wish that either the tiny part of thigh in the lower left corner wasn't visible, or that the top had fallen open to reveal more skin.
Nice lighting and focus on her eyes. I think I would have cropped it right at the end of the tendril of hair. Might not be a traditional size, but so much white and the smocking on the blouse, is a touch distracting to me. ;~D
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