I see here, a pro female model posing in my crappie studio. Idea and composition is good, but I think you needed a bit better settings, and post process... a bit more. Maybe bit more close up? Not bad though :)
OK action shot, but a little soft on focus and doesn't do much to sell the car to me. Maybe a three-quarters angle instead of shooting the car head on would have worked better. 4
I like the title and the action shot for an ad for Hummer. I just think a closeup of the vehicle going through the water would have really made for a more dramatic shot and a better ad
Wonderful trail through the woods and background colours.
For me this shot would have been great if you could have got down to the level of the water so that you took the car, and it's bow wave square-on, and still had the background.
Everyone always has a different opinion about the cropping... who knows? I think, for myself anyway, that I would have like to see the shot tighter on the car plowing through the water, rather than the road in the b.g. I love the shot regardless and it certainly sells the concept of the Hummer. 9
I love this AD but whites are a bit blown out. Next time try metering on your brightest spots then you can dodge the darker areas after you adjust your neutrals. good luck and If you have any questions just ask and Ill try to help.
~~Cher~~
Cool shot. It's a pity the subject is blown out. Fix the exposure, do some editing on the background, crop a little off the bottom, and this would be great. Nice leading lines.
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