Last minute submission,I know this will get a low score because it doesnt fit the challenge completely but I guess ill have to hope that people will be open minded
Lots of luv Mundi
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avoid the boy who and how can you be safe with him. Having gone far enough just enter the choice who are you safe with the man or the boy the fear or some rejoycing death death seekers of the meer mortal fold of life end it now smear everything in the perfect life color of red.
That is one big shotgun with one little person, yikes! The shot is good, the lighting is almost perfect except the shadows across the body from different lights is a bit distracting though it does lend to the conflict of the shot itself. The look on the model's face is perfect and the way the barrell of the gun disappears in the background but the shadow is whole is very nice. A 8
I see no conflict here, desperation maybe, a young man with a rifle yes! The conflct should be obvious to me, if there is a conflict it is hidden here.
Very good picture, but I dislike guns.
As the challenge is conflict I will score this for the picture merit alone. 6
I usually mark gun and ammo shots very low.
The hot spots are just a little hot, especially for the mood of this photo. I think darker is better for portraying the anger shown on this young man's face. The pose is good. The photo should be cropped a little more to make his face more prominent in the picture since it is really the focal point. I think you did well though. 7
nice dramatic lighting, the only suggestion I would make [and you do'nt have to listen!] is to move the gun barrel to the other shoulder to avoid the shadow on his face, his eyes and mouth [expression] are what what make this photo impressionable. 6
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