Too much reflection on the windshield, and on the hoods. not bad location, leaf on the ground is killing me :/ not bad, but not enough for me to spend that kind of money :/
Very wide border, whats going on there. The woman is a bit distracting. Nice clean cars but real adverts tend to have missing number plates or neutral ones so the same image can be used in marketing campaigns in various worldwide territories. A big yellow number plate at the front, for me in the UK, is very distracting and rather spoils the shot for me. Perhaps you could have post processed them out. Also, taken from eye-level which is pretty boring, a ground level shot, with a really wide angle lens to get some of the building in behind - "going up in the world" looking from ground to sky type concept would have worked well with your title
The reflections on the windows are very distracting, a Circular Polariser would of helped to cut these back a bit.. a deep DOF leaves this shot feeling rather flat.
Z4 and a 5-Series? Beautifully shot. Only critique is the reflections on the glass is too intense, I would have reduced it just a little bit with a polarizer.
Nice shot of two nice carsgood composition and sharpness although I find the reflections on their bodies and windshields a little overpowering (although I appreciate that there is not too much that you could do to avoid this). Nice luse of the kerb to create a leading diagonal
This coud be enhanced for me by losing the reflection from the windscreen and having the lady (exiting the picture at the back) actually by the cars, or even better maybe a bit of movement blur as people walk around these and look at them.
nice set up for these cars.the high contrast between the dark paint and the brighter background works well. There are 3 things that distract me: the woman on the left and the slight OOF on the car in the background (a longer shutterspeed could have made the woman invisible and in crease the DOF). the 3rd part are the strong reflections on the hood and wind shield (no idea how to avoid them)
The most distracting thing here is the reflections. The cars are so clean and shiny, you almost don't see the cars, just the busy reflections. A polariser could really help here, or maybe just a different standpoint. I like the slogan. Is that their's or yours?
Nice car's. I like that the colors match and it it is a believable shoot to put them in front of 5 star hotel "maybe the Intercontinental?" The only thing that bothers me are that the reflections are so intense that they distract from the cars. IMHO 6