Light-Rays add focus to subject, but the strong whites of this area could hold the score down because "blow-outs" are frowned upon by photographic purists. Photographic Artists, like myself, however, honor those who know that the camera is the photographer's paintbrush, light is the medium, and reality is the platform for creation.
Artists create that which is in the heart! Popularity must NEVER be an impediment! :)
This composition really appeals to me - it's very interesting.
The highlights are too strong however (my 2 cents) - meaning blown highlights distract from the image - but again, an excellent composition! A good entry!