Hey, it´s great, a kind of "voyeur" here. The woman out of focus, just passing, makes the scene even more interesting. The only thing I would do here is putting the couple a little bit more to the left to make the composition more balanced. But still one of my three favorites, I hope this one gets a ribbon.
His jacket is too dark, and the pole coming out of his head hurts the composition a bit, but, her expression is great, and makes up for some of the difficulties of taking a candid like this.
I like the choice of B/W for this photo. Perhaps a little closer cropping to eliminate the out-of-focus person on the right and the pole on the left would have strengthened the focus of the two people.
I really like this photo. It's very photojournlistic! I think you really captured the mood of this theme. Plus.. it's clear you took the time to make sure it was a quality shot. I like the composition and the movement (with the blurry woman in the right hand corner). Good luck!