This looks just like a canvas print that you took a picture of. I wish it could've been just a little sharper and not quite so blurry. Just my opinion. BB
Ok, so you have "mood" problems. The time you turn your had the other way, you can go from happy to sad very quick. I see the story, Nice execution. Lighting needs a bit more work, for example, left happy face lid up much more than middle face and right "sad" face. Not a bad photo overall :)
This is awesome! I love how you've managed to blend all your faces into one. The lighting is great and I like the texture, oh I just love of it ok, a great abstract portrait.
I really like your idea, and lighting, I just think if you were able to have more of a centered composition it would have helped IMO. Nice work non the less.