I had no problem with the connection to the challenge - all weddings are essentially fairy tales, as one always hopes the bride and groom will "live happily ever after". Very nice work.
Excellent mono conversion, and great capture of the moment. A lot of entries to these challenges afford multiple shots to get things perfect and I myself have spent hours over a single image, but here you will only have had a very small window to reel off some memory card space so you've done well. Great natural expressions and well composed although could perhaps have done with a little clockwise rotation during cropping to get your vertical lines in the background vertical.
I imagine you are getting a not so good score with the shoehorn title/entry. I think the photo itself is excellent, you got some wonderful expressions on the bride and groom and they look very happy. But doesn't really fit what the challenge was about.