Good idea. Perhaps this could use a slightly better composition as the eye is not drawn to any specific area. It is lead off the page by the bottle. I think you wanted the eye to find the word drunkeness, but I'm sure most people won't look at it long enough to find it. I think it's funny that it comes right after orgies... 5
technically nicely taken. am i supposed to actually read the text on the photo to get it cause im too lazy for that. i want to only read visual clues to understand
Where is the conflict with a bottle of whisky and the bible how else are you suppose to get through it if your not drinking? Well if you are not suppose to get drunk then why did jesus turn water into wine and you have to be drunk to read that book or else you aren't ever going to get through its contribed position the conflict would be to have the bible without having the booze.